Experiment with Ideas

Hello again, everyone.

While talking to a friend, I decided to play a game with him. The game was to think up a setting and a situation and write what pops into your head. Or maybe you came up with a character first. It doesn't matter, so long as you write quickly and effectively. Anyway, here are the two I made up.
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'Revenge of Jodo'

There he is, my arch nemesis. Yugo Varley has been a pain in my ass for the past three months. He's got away from me plenty of times, but not now, he's going to pay.

"You gonna do somethin', huh!? Jodo Girest. You can't beat me, you already know that, let's end this today, yeah!?" As he was yappin' his gums off, I took notice that the Train we were standing on was shaking a bit more, it seemed unstable. This was my time to move.

The air was dry as a dragons lung, and hot as one at that. I lifted up my arm to shield my eyes from the dancing bead in the sky. I noticed Yugo make a move toward his gun, and quickly my hand found it's way on it's own hot piece of steel.

The guns were firing at a rapid pace. Even though I was in the middle of a fire fight, I sure did love the smell of gun powder. So much so, that I missed every shot. Before I knew it though, Yugo had me by the collar. "Listen, you're not going to take me in, not now, not ever! I'm going to take this money and this Train here is going to derail and everyone is going to die."

I then felt myself lifted up in the air, it almost felt as if I was going to fly off the Train, but I was slammed back down. The wind was knocked out of me so fast I thought I lost my lungs. "You listen, Yugo, I'm going to take back this money and you're going to die."

As he laughed hysterically, I could see every rotten tooth in his decrepit mouth. "You fool! I have the upper hand here!"

As I was laying there, I decided to drink in the moment, as I normally do. As the vibrations got worse I felt as if I was doing a cheap whore on a Saturday night. This Train was soon going to derail. "Yugo, guess what? Your time is here."

With that Yugo only saw one bullet exit my chamber. It's all I needed to get the job done. He was laying there wailing in pain, not that I gave a single damn. "Jodo, you dead carcass, I'm going to kill you!"

"You're going to kill me? You're the one with a bullet to the knee." I just snatched the money bag from him and hopped off. As I did, the screeching wheels were cascading in the distance a set ways until the Train gave way and fell over. I saw Yugo get flung like he rode in on a tornado. "Whoowee! That must've been fun!" I said to myself. The explosion that came seconds later was beautiful. Majestic fireballs and heated metal flung every which way. Of course, I couldn't continue to look at it, I'm not the type to look at explosions.
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'Anguish'

When I came to, I couldn't see a thing and my hands felt as if they were tied behind a chair. "Is anyone there? Hey! Josh!?" I sat silent for a moment, utterly terrified for what may be happening. All I could feel was the rough, itchy blindfold. I could smell the stench of rot in the air. I had no idea where I was or how I got here. My heart started pounding to such a degree that i'm certain whoever was with me could hear it. "Hey, is anyone there!?"

I then heard a noise coming from my right. Shuffling of feet and the sound of someone messing with metal objects. I tried desperately to free myself. But as I struggled I felt a sharp pain in my wrists. I then realized what my hands were bound in, barbed wire. I couldn't stand it anymore, i'm confused, I have no idea why I'm here or why someone is doing this to me. I just want to die, i'm in a situation I cant seem to get out of.

"Please, whoever you are, I'm sorry, okay!? If I did anything to hurt you or wrong you in any way I-" Just then I felt a persons hand grab my tongue, and after that, intense pain, such pain I've never experienced in my life.

Crying in agonizing pain, all I could do was continue to plead. "I'm shorry, peash, I'm shorry." My mouth felt hot pain and liquid warmth. As I was pleading, I could feel the warm liquid coming down my mouth and my chin. I was slipping in and out of consciousness. "Peash...kir me."
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If you read this, tell me what you think! :-)